Post by darkangel on Jul 25, 2010 23:03:34 GMT -5
Hope this is where this belongs...I'm just following Seraphinu's instructions XD
Name Gingerfur
Age 42 moons
Gender Female
Character TypeCat
Alliance - ThunderClan!
Rank - Warrior
Picture -
Appearance - Gingerfur has emerald green eyes that can be dagger-filled (figuratively) and pierce through her enemies, or can be filled with kindness towards her companions. She has sleek, Ginger fur, hence her name, and she makes it an important priority to look her best for her clanmates. She has a long, thick tail which helps keep her feet warm during cold leaf-bare. Her claws are always sharp; she makes it a priority to always sharpen them on anything she can find whenever they give the slightest inkling of thought to her about dullness. Her underbelly, which, importantly, she keeps groomed, is a slightly lighter shade of ginger than the rest of her, though the rest of her is mostly the same shade. She is more wiry than heavyset, and she values her speed in a fight. She can dash in quickly, execute some devastating moves, then move out equally as agilely. She is also very strong, and this is how the former leader saw fit to let her be deputy. A combination of her tall, wiry frame, devastating agility, and lethal strength make for a good combination in a battle.
Personality - Gingerfur is a very kind she-cat, always prone to help others except her enemies. She visits the Queens, Kits, and Medicine cat often, and also visits any cat that is mourning. Her enemies usually fear her wrath,and they have very good reason to! She has a fiery hot temper and is not afraid to defend her honor or her clan. In battle she is usually the one to strike first-- as long as the battle has been fairly made with good reasoning on both sides. She hates traitors to her clan, but she is wise and does not do things spontaneously. She respects all of her clanmates, young or old, small or large, and always listens to their opinions before making a big decision. She never does anything drastic without consulting her deputy or medicine cat first. If anything needs to be done, she is always in the group helping that get done.
History - Gingerfur was a cute, loving little kit, who always went around and comforted others if they needed comforting. She was born in a litter of two. Her brother was also ginger, as she was, and he carried the name of Scarletclaw. She was an ambitious apprentice, always striving to be the best of the best. She vowed that she would be the best warrior the clan had ever seen! Halfway through her apprenticeship, her mother and father, who were battling side-by-side, were killed during a fox attack. They died valiantly saving the kits the fox was trying to get at, and the fox died alongside them. From this moment forward, Gingerfur would kill whatever fox she saw, and she would one day avenge her parents in a way StarClan would commend her for. One day on patrol with her brother and the former leader of the clan, a badger had been sighted on the border. Her brother bravely leaped into battle with it, and the former leader fought as well. Gingerfur saw that the badger was three times all of their size put together, but she still fought with all of her strength. Soon the badger lay dead at their feet, but not without a severe price. Her brother was stone-dead, and the leader had sustained several terrible injuries. She tirelessly dragged both bodies back to camp so they could have a proper funeral for her brother, and maybe have a chance of saving the leader. But the leader lost her last life and the deputy ended up choosing her as new deputy for her tireless strength in protecting her clanmates and her sense of loyalty.
Roleplay Example - Gingerstar padded through the forest, on one of her usual long walks. She was contemplating the message as she had done before, the one from StarClan. She paused to lap up a few drops of water from the river, but then continued onwards. She sat down and another flashback flashed through her eyes again. It was when her parents were struck down in front of her, after delivering the fox's final blow. Gingerstar shook her head. That was done. Her throat convulsed again as she ran the next horrifying scene of her life-- as she watched her brother struck down by the badger. She tried not to let tears stream down her eyes as she recalled the terrible scene when the badger raked its claws down her brother's throat-- no. She had to remain strong with her clan.
She looked up into the sky and nearly gasped. The starry outline of her brother seemed to stare back at her. She blinked again, and it disappeared, only to resemble a random clump of stars again.
Was Scarletclaw watching her now? How about her parents? Russetfoot? Emberpelt?
"I'll avenge you, mother, father, Scarletclaw," she meowed aloud, not caring if any cat thought she had bees in her brain for talking to stars. "You won't have died in vain!"
Codeword - Bluefire
Again, First time here, so I hope I did it right...
General Character Information
[/b][/size]Name Gingerfur
Age 42 moons
Gender Female
Character TypeCat
Alliance - ThunderClan!
Rank - Warrior
Picture -
Appearance - Gingerfur has emerald green eyes that can be dagger-filled (figuratively) and pierce through her enemies, or can be filled with kindness towards her companions. She has sleek, Ginger fur, hence her name, and she makes it an important priority to look her best for her clanmates. She has a long, thick tail which helps keep her feet warm during cold leaf-bare. Her claws are always sharp; she makes it a priority to always sharpen them on anything she can find whenever they give the slightest inkling of thought to her about dullness. Her underbelly, which, importantly, she keeps groomed, is a slightly lighter shade of ginger than the rest of her, though the rest of her is mostly the same shade. She is more wiry than heavyset, and she values her speed in a fight. She can dash in quickly, execute some devastating moves, then move out equally as agilely. She is also very strong, and this is how the former leader saw fit to let her be deputy. A combination of her tall, wiry frame, devastating agility, and lethal strength make for a good combination in a battle.
Personality - Gingerfur is a very kind she-cat, always prone to help others except her enemies. She visits the Queens, Kits, and Medicine cat often, and also visits any cat that is mourning. Her enemies usually fear her wrath,and they have very good reason to! She has a fiery hot temper and is not afraid to defend her honor or her clan. In battle she is usually the one to strike first-- as long as the battle has been fairly made with good reasoning on both sides. She hates traitors to her clan, but she is wise and does not do things spontaneously. She respects all of her clanmates, young or old, small or large, and always listens to their opinions before making a big decision. She never does anything drastic without consulting her deputy or medicine cat first. If anything needs to be done, she is always in the group helping that get done.
History - Gingerfur was a cute, loving little kit, who always went around and comforted others if they needed comforting. She was born in a litter of two. Her brother was also ginger, as she was, and he carried the name of Scarletclaw. She was an ambitious apprentice, always striving to be the best of the best. She vowed that she would be the best warrior the clan had ever seen! Halfway through her apprenticeship, her mother and father, who were battling side-by-side, were killed during a fox attack. They died valiantly saving the kits the fox was trying to get at, and the fox died alongside them. From this moment forward, Gingerfur would kill whatever fox she saw, and she would one day avenge her parents in a way StarClan would commend her for. One day on patrol with her brother and the former leader of the clan, a badger had been sighted on the border. Her brother bravely leaped into battle with it, and the former leader fought as well. Gingerfur saw that the badger was three times all of their size put together, but she still fought with all of her strength. Soon the badger lay dead at their feet, but not without a severe price. Her brother was stone-dead, and the leader had sustained several terrible injuries. She tirelessly dragged both bodies back to camp so they could have a proper funeral for her brother, and maybe have a chance of saving the leader. But the leader lost her last life and the deputy ended up choosing her as new deputy for her tireless strength in protecting her clanmates and her sense of loyalty.
Roleplay Example - Gingerstar padded through the forest, on one of her usual long walks. She was contemplating the message as she had done before, the one from StarClan. She paused to lap up a few drops of water from the river, but then continued onwards. She sat down and another flashback flashed through her eyes again. It was when her parents were struck down in front of her, after delivering the fox's final blow. Gingerstar shook her head. That was done. Her throat convulsed again as she ran the next horrifying scene of her life-- as she watched her brother struck down by the badger. She tried not to let tears stream down her eyes as she recalled the terrible scene when the badger raked its claws down her brother's throat-- no. She had to remain strong with her clan.
She looked up into the sky and nearly gasped. The starry outline of her brother seemed to stare back at her. She blinked again, and it disappeared, only to resemble a random clump of stars again.
Was Scarletclaw watching her now? How about her parents? Russetfoot? Emberpelt?
"I'll avenge you, mother, father, Scarletclaw," she meowed aloud, not caring if any cat thought she had bees in her brain for talking to stars. "You won't have died in vain!"
Codeword - Bluefire
Again, First time here, so I hope I did it right...
My fanfic needs critique: 
