Post by darkangel on Aug 21, 2010 15:25:38 GMT -5
General Character Information
[/b][/size]Name Crimsonheart (Crimsonkit, Crimsonpaw, Crimsonheart)
Age 30 moons
Gender female
Character Type Cat
Alliance - ThunderClan!
Rank - Warrior
Picture -
Appearance - Crimsonheart is a very petite cat with long russet fur and amber-hazel eyes. Her fur is long but not long enough to reach the ground or get in the way of her hunting, and she makes it a priority to make it well-groomed. She enjoys basking to warm herself up, though her long fur does keep her warm during winter nights, and her paws are glad of it. Her pelt does not have many remarkable designs on it, except for the occasional pattern.
Crimsonheart is not heavyset at all, as stated before, she is rather petite and an alarmingly speedy runner. This gives her disadvantages and advantages, as she can use her agility as an advantage when she fights other cats, and she can also squeeze into small spaces. This is also a disadvantage, for her size is often ridiculed among other clans, but she'll show them when the time comes!
Personality - Crimsonheart is normally very friendly and personable. As a kit, she loved to play rough though she kept calm and kind, and she loved making friends with other kits. She loved to wreak mischief as well, though she soon grew out of it as the moons progressed. If you are a rogue on the border, or another clan, she won't be so aggressive as to show fang and claw immediately, though she will be cautious and not too open or friendly, for she knows where her loyalties lie. If you are her enemy, she always has a quick retort for any sarcastic remark, so not many cats get away unscathed when remarking sarcastically about her size among other things. Despite being petite she is also strong, and this is another advantage when it comes to enemies. She is always ready to defend her honor and her clan.
History - As a kit, and as stated above, she loved to play rough and aspired to be a great warrior. She never let ambition get ahead of her, and she usually kept her pride in check. She soon grew out of her mischief making as she grew into an apprentice, to her parents' pride, and she became Gingerstar(fur, at the time)'s a first apprentice. Soon after, her parents were killed by a fierce battle with rogues, on the border. They died, but before then, managed to scare the rogues off. She lives in pride of their memory and feels more than a little sorrow over their memory at times, but she does not let that hinder her duty as a warrior. As her apprenticeship grew, she was an avid hunter and fighter, though her hunting skills overshadowed her fighting skills because ofher small frame, but only a little bit. She aspires to one day be as great of a warrior as her mentor, Gingerstar, was, for Gingerstar is like a mother to her because her parents are deceased.
Roleplay Example - Give us a sample of how you roleplay this character. Crimsonheart was on one of her singular walks she took on occasion; she enjoyed the beauty of the forest they lived in and wanted to appreciate it during times of well earned peace and rest. Her heart felt heavy with sorrow as usual, because during these walks alone her mind was left to wander, and usually lingered on the subject of her parents. She was walking along the border, near where her parents had perished. It seemed so long ago, yet sometimes it felt as if it were only yesterday.
She saw a small puddle of fresh water from a small drizzling storm there had been the day before and she lapped up water eagerly with her tongue, then kept walking. It was time she returned to camp, anyhow.
Codeword - Bluefire
My fanfic needs critique: 
I think her and Firetail could have a fun time teasing each other 
